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New Post 4/20/2008 5:11 AM
User is offline Attica
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Re: 'SF5.07c: Untitled' discussion thread. Warning, Spoilers!  (N/A)

Something happened to my comment on the Chapter page, anyways I did like this chapter even though I gave it like 3 stars. I guess it just didn't reach out to me like every single chapter that preceded it did and still does. Maybe it was because of the time between this one and the last, (yes I know it wasn't the longest gap).


I did feel uncomfortable reading certain parts of it though. Specifically the parts where Storm runs into the pack and joins them (because this is how Storms first reuniting with Lucas after the falling out ends up being and I expected more). The way angry Storm devours happy Storm after Dades loss in the Semi-final is announced, it felt to abrupt and unnecessary, and lastly the handshake which was also one of my favorite scenes but still felt strange to read. Maybe I would have preferred it if he never turned around because the handshake didn't convey the message Storm was hoping for. A smile would have done more I think. The handshake felt cold and forced, yet it was like Storm felt content afterwards.


I did enjoy the chapter as it bought Sarah and Mike back. I loved it when Mike pushed Storm because I miss Mike and his right to do that without being struck by lightning. I also now, knowing how Storm feels towards Marcel, feel more comfortable in the idea of them two being together.
The sad thing is that for me I realized today that 'The price we pay for glory' may very well have been the last chapter of the story for me and I don't mind that it may not be the happiest ending. This one kinda did feel like an interlude, I guess it’s because it takes place outside Merlow. Still it’s an awesome Story (meaning your a great writer Ty!) and I love reading about the characters as much as the next Stormfront fan.

:)

ps. I am a bit over the tongue poking too, I don't know if its the 10yr old version or if its like a :P


I got the better end of the deal. I only lent you my body - you lent me your dream.
 
New Post 4/21/2008 5:38 AM
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Re: 'SF5.07c: Untitled' discussion thread. Warning, Spoilers!  (N/A)

Dude Ty,

Please. Lol I can't help but say this but PLEASE may SF end with happiness. I loved 5.07c, but seeing Storm so torn away, his relationships with Dade and Lucas in tatters except for the few moments that occurred in "Untitled," it's horrible to watch - painful almost. Daniel...? Corey and Su called him Daniel? I mean COME ON!

He's Storm, Lucas is meant to be his boy and Dade is meant to be his little brother. I just pray that is the way it ends up.

 
New Post 4/21/2008 11:07 AM
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Re: 'SF5.07c: Untitled' discussion thread. Warning, Spoilers!  (N/A)

As always I am enjoying this story so much. I very much look forward to the next installment sometime before the year 2025 :)

As to the other comments, angst is part of life. It will end how it ends.

Sarah may die. Dade and Storm may never speak again. They could also all have a beautiful get-together and laugh into the night. Or you could get an ending like Soprano's that leaves everyone guessing. What will be, will be. It will be good. Ty's really not let you down yet and I'm sure he won't as it ends either.

 

 


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New Post 4/21/2008 11:16 AM
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Re: 'SF5.07c: Untitled' discussion thread. Warning, Spoilers!  (N/A)

Wow.

This chapter did not exhibit the reaction from people that I was expecting at all. I've had a chance to read through everyones comments and what not and I still can't really see the disconnection people are talking about. Storm is as Storm does. That is his way. The boy is downright bi-polar at times, and for me that's part of the appeal.

I guess what this chapter highlighted for me was that different people seem to take a away different things from this story, which is an amazing testament to the dimensions that Ty adds to his work. The fact that we can sit here and debate a characters motivations and feelings just goes to show that they were realistic enough in the first place that things seem out of place for them. I think that this was a throwback to the Storm of old for me. If anything, he seemed more coherently himself than he has for a long time. It made me really happy to see him happy again, but the rage that he bought with him is also very Storm.

The meeting between Dade and Storm for me was expertly placed. The image of so much going on around them and it all fading into the background for that one moment of universal truth made it all the more pointed for me. It was so realistic in my head. Moments like that which are so important flash by before you even realise that they are gone, and it's only later that the true significance becomes apparent.

Like life, things don't turn out as people planned them. I can't wait for the next chapter to be ready and while the fact that the Stormy One is leaving again breaks my heart (Ty, you tease us with these little cameos too much), I'm sure it's for the right reasons. The fallout from these last four chapters will see Dade and Lucas through to a crashing conclusion.

Much love Ty, you always know how to draw a crowd.


"Nothing has meaning until it changes what we think or who we are" - Anonymous.
 
New Post 4/22/2008 4:36 AM
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Re: 'SF5.07c: Untitled' discussion thread. Warning, Spoilers!  (N/A)

I think you hit the nail right on the head, Phoenix.  When Ty sent me this chapter I was sure everyone was going to love it.  I think the main reason why people have mixed feelings here is that we're all different, hehe.  We see the situations and people differently and so we interpret them differently.  The happy ending point exemplifies this.  Some people want a happy ending, others a poignant one, and some of us just want to see how Ty's planning on worming himself out of the mess he's made :P  But like Phoenix said, the disagreement signifies a great story.  There's a reason why people still debate Shakespeare, Ibsen and Camus.

As for the happy ending, I wouldn't get my hopes up.  Knowing Ty, it won't be a tragic ending, but not necessarily happy either.  The happy ending is not always the most meaningful one.


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New Post 4/30/2008 4:45 AM
User is offline strawberry dude
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Re: 'SF5.07c: Untitled' discussion thread. Warning, Spoilers!  (Philippines)

I wrote the rest of what I feel about this chapter on Ty's latest pondering. I just want to react about that "happy ending".

Again, I'll mention that I have always been for Storm and Lucas. Storm Front will always be about them for me. Always has, always will. And in that aspect, this is the only happy ending that I would like to have from Storm Front. Whether Ty writes it that way or not, I can have my own version in my head that'll always be the love story of the two. I'm just conflicted as to how they'll get there from this point on. Maybe Lucas will be the bridge between Storm and Dade. But I don't even care if Storm and Dade even regain that brotherly bond or just remain civil. I just want a series of events that'll point Storm back to Lucas' trail again. Hint. Hehehe.

Oh, before I completely forget, I've yet to see how Storm shows how he's moved on instead of holding on to all of it (As pointed out by Marty Lee from the previous chapter).


"I wait not for the one who makes me take a second look.. but for the one who makes me never want to look away in the first place.."
 
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