i was so happy to get a chance to see what's been festering in Storm's mind since his departure.  i didn't expect his confrontation with Marty Lee would turn out so violent but i think he deserved it.  i'm not sure if i forgot when Marty Lee arranged Storm's jeep to be stolen or whether it was revealed for the first time in this chapter,  fbut that came as another suprise.  i like the tension that's building up.  i really want to know what's going to happen betwen Dade and Storm in their final match and how Storm is going to react to Lucas.  

This is the longest story that i have ever read that can keep my attention the whole way through... im in awe

actually i remember something being said about marty lee and the jeep. and dade being "raped" by marty lee was in an interlude. im not sure what Lucas being set up was though... maybe with ashley, although i could be wrong...

 oh and if Marty Lee and Lucas are from the same area then why doesn't Marty Lee say  "dude" all the time like Lucas does? or is it because of Marty Lee's from a wealthy family?

I didn't see the confrontation between Marty Lee and Storm happening when it did......I thought Storm would at least wait until after the competion so that he could focus on it and not everything else that is going on.   I hope that Storm and Dade can get their problems worked out and Dade can have the big brother that he wants and Storm can have the family he deserves.......

As for Lucas and Storm, they both seem to stil have feeling for each other and I don't think either will be satisfied or be the whole person they need to be without each other.......