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New Post 6/26/2007 12:51 AM
User is offline Ty
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E1.1 - A Destiny Revealed  (N/A)

Empires finally makes its return to StormNation!  The Redux has arrived!

Some of you may be thinking ... I don't remember that chapter.  Keep in mind, this isn't the original story.  E1 has been rewritten and split up into two or three parts now.  This is the first part.  I urge you to read the original version and the Redux.  I will try to finish the next part within a few days.  Scenes have been rewritten, restructured and new scenes entered.  Dying to know what you think so far in comparison. 


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New Post 6/26/2007 6:13 AM
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Re: E1.1 - A Destiny Revealed  (United States)

Are you planning on setting up the Redux, and then posting the original?  Because I'm pretty much a newbie, and didn't even know empires existed until a while ago.  So, I can't tell you what I think, because I have nothing to compare it to *shrugs*

Let us know when you decide to post the original Empires, and then I'll tell you what I think then.  Deal?

So far, I like it...

 
New Post 6/26/2007 8:31 AM
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Re: E1.1 - A Destiny Revealed  (N/A)

At the top of the redux Empires chapter, there is a link to the origina version of chapter 1.


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New Post 6/26/2007 4:40 PM
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Re: E1.1 - A Destiny Revealed  (United States)

Ah!  I like the new chapter better.... Now I wanna see how you redo the rest...

 
New Post 6/28/2007 3:38 AM
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Re: E1.1 - A Destiny Revealed  (United Kingdom)

I like the new chapter better, it has a lot more detail and is much easier to understand. Will u be re-writing the whole of Empires, or just the "destinies" part, because im sorry but i dnt understand what you mean. If you're not re-writing the whole lot, will u be posting the other version, as i was not here when it was on the old site, and i never got a chance to read it. But up to now im enjoying it.

 
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